Mastering Script Revisions: Tips for Indie Producers

As an indie producer, knowing how to give effective notes and ask for revisions is critical to bringing your vision to the screen.

The process of revising a script can be difficult, especially when dealing with tight budgets and limited resources. As a seasoned indie producer, I understand the importance of script revisions in bringing a project to fruition.

WHY IT MATTERS:

Effective script revisions mean the difference between a mediocre film and a great one.

THE BIG PICTURE:

As an indie producer, you have to wear many hats, and one of the most important is that of a script editor. In order to bring your vision to the screen, you need to be able to give effective notes and ask for revisions in a way that is constructive and collaborative. This requires a combination of communication skills, creative vision, and an understanding of what makes a compelling story.

ZOOM OUT:

One example of a film that went through extensive script revisions is The Social Network, directed by David Fincher. The initial script by Aaron Sorkin was over 180 pages, and it took multiple revisions to bring it down to a manageable length. This process of honing in on the core story is essential to any successful film.

ZOOM IN:

In The Social Network, one key detail that emerged from the script revisions was the focus on the relationship between Mark Zuckerberg and Eduardo Saverin. This dynamic was not as prominent in the initial script, but through revisions, it became the emotional heart of the film.

ACTION ITEMS:

• 👉 Collaborate with the writer to understand their vision and goals for the story.

• 👉 Be specific and constructive in your notes, focusing on what is working and what can be improved.

• 👉 Be open to feedback and willing to revise your own notes based on the writer's responses.

SEE IT IN PRACTICE:

• 🎬 Primer (2004), directed by Shane Carruth, made for $7,000

• 🎬 Fruitvale Station (2013), directed by Ryan Coogler, made for $1.3 million

• 🎬 The Florida Project (2017), directed by Sean Baker, made for $2 million